Re: Poetry by Deni aka Lady LaRouge * **some added 2/23* I agree with Cecilie, I do like the tone of this poem. I am in awe of your talent in capturing the mood in so few words!
Re: Poetry by Deni aka Lady LaRouge * **some added 2/23* Glad you ladies like those- here are a couple more.....
You Bring Me Joy 1/27/07
You bring me joy my friend
You bring me joy
Even with the sorrow and the pain we share
You bring me joy
To have someone there
Accepting and uncritical
You bring me joy
You are beautiful and sweet
And kind
Though I am not sure you believe it
You bring me joy
I hope someday that you will find
Someone to bring
Some joy to you
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Regardless 1/21/07
Even when I’m happy
You can tell me if you are sad
I will not be angry at that
I will try not to judge you
Or the way that you cope
I am your friend regardless
And I hope you are mine
Regardless
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Reminded of You 1/29/07
The sky is so blue
It is just like your eyes
The clouds are so white
That I think of your smile
The grasses are brown
But they do not look dead
I think of the wavy
Brown hair on your head
Not much more to say
But the sun shines so bright
That I think of your face
It will cheer me tonight
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(I'll share that last one was inspired by Hugh Dancy and I know it's a bit silly. This batxch in general may not be my best but some people were asking me to post more)
Re: Poetry by Deni aka Lady LaRouge * *ADDED 3/25 ** I've been away for a week, Deni, and just caught these....as usual, I am impressed at your way of creating mental imagery (especially the one about Hugh!)
thanks to 3sacharm for siggi