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Danism: Using stupid sounding or vague descriptions to put what may be an intellectual point across.
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10/9/2005, 6:50 pm
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Re: Night.
There's something about it I really like, but I just can't put my finger on it... still analysing...
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10/9/2005, 8:12 pm
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Re: Night.
tell me when you`re through. quite interested in what people think of this, as i see it as a braver attempt in comparison to the previous ones. feel free to dislike it too, but i`d like to know why if you do.
10/9/2005, 8:26 pm
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Re: Night.
I agree, it's definitely a braver attempt, which is why I'm taking my time thinking about it...
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10/9/2005, 9:15 pm
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Re: Night.
I like it.
I read as very stuttery and almost monosyllabic ... almost, but that seems to add to the emphasise on the point ...
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thanx dan
10/9/2005, 11:41 pm
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Re: Night.
seems quite dark, I like.
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11/1/2005, 11:02 pm
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goody.
11/3/2005, 12:42 am
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*nod nod* excellent excellent
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11/16/2005, 11:57 pm
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