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stripycardy
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Something I wrote a while ago which i've found and want to post:

The light that shone
for all of us,
at twelve, did dwindle down
no more the brightness all around,
a fog engulfs us now.

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Too short ... it could use a few more lines really.

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okkies, but you can get short poems. emoticon

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