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calling all Song Writers
Post your songs too I wanna see them!-
This ones called "Find Me"
Its rushing past our eyes
Its ripping past our ears
Everything is silent.
Its like darkness itself flushed us out.
(chorus)
Can You see me?
Falling in these lies.
Find me, find me in these fears
Can You hear me? Calling out to You in the wind.
Find me, find me in these fights.
Woah-h
Its leading me to the edge
Its trying to cover me in hate
Everything is cruel
Darkness makes us suffer us to the end.
(chorus)
Find me in the light You shine.
Find me in this love You give.
Find me through this pain that You heal, Jesus.
(chorus)
Thats it.
POST YOUR WRITTEN SONGS NOW! 
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Re: New song...YAY
well, all of mine are pretty long cuz i write rap, but i can copy/paste em on here from my soundclick. i'll go get one!
"Definition"
The Definition of the word definition
The thing your life's about, the thing you're representin'
What's your definition? What does your life mean?
When people look at you, what is it they see?
(HOOK)
Charm is deceptive and beauty will pass
But the fear of God's the one thing that'll last
Proverbs 31:30's where you'll find these words
But I'm a say it loud til everybody has heard
Jesus came down from heaven through that virgin birth
Then He was crucified and dies for everybody on earth
But on the third day He rose just to save you from the curse
So don't let no one but God try to tell you what you're worth
It won't matter what they think if God's the One you're representin'
It won't matter what they think if God's ya definition
How many y'all girls like MTV
And ya wish ya looked more like Angelina Jolie
And ya want Britney's hair but, oh wait, it's all gone
So now all of y'all think it's cool to be bald
Well I'm sick of all that so now I gotta take a stand
Even if most of the world don't know who I am
The entire human race is about as dumb as sheep
Cuz this generation's got way too much conformity
I mean come on why do all the girls like Tom Cruise
But reject a lovin God who really cares about you
God'll make ya happier than Brad Pitt can
So why don't you accept Him cuz He's reachin out His hand
He wants to be the definition of ya whole entire life
Not just in ya heart but also on the outside
It don't matter if ya look like Britney Spears or not
I know God'll always love ya just because of who ya are
Cuz He gave up heaven for like 33 years
To be beaten and killed so He could conquer all ya fears
If ya don't believe me you can read it in His word
Matthew chapter 27 in the 50th verse
He gave up His spirit and yeah that means He died
And because of that anyone can have eternal life
So you can listen to the truth and just let God define you
Or you can watch your MTV and let the world blind you
[HOOK]
People listen up now when I tell ya this
I ain't afraid of y'all and yeah I can take a diss
Cuz Christ's my definition no matter what ya say
But why'd I wanna be like y'all anyway?
Y'all didn't die on a cross just to save my life
Now ya think I wanna follow you? Yeah right
I mean I know I ain't the best and I know I ain't the hardest
I'm just an ordinary Caucasian hip-hop artist
But rappin don't define me, it's just my God that does
That's why I drop His name in every rhyme I bust
Cuz I don't need the money and the fame and all that stuff
Eternal life and treasure in heaven is enough
Cuz I know ya fame and cash'll pass fast it won't last
And ya won't have jack you'll be trapped in hell and that's a fact
Ya want a definition that'll last eternally?
Give it up and make Christ your identity
I know so many y'all got earthly definitions
But my only definition is the One Who's forgiven
Everyone on earth from the moms to dads to the children
Who used to be sinnin but made Him their definition
Lemme tell ya now the reason for my repetition
The first time around some of y'all ya be missin
The message on this track right now that I'm givin
The meanin of my words and the rhymes that I'm spittin
[HOOK]
So what's ya definition? That's what I wanna know
Is it in ya money or ya cars or ya clothes
Or ya friends or ya foes or ya bling or ya dough
Or braids or ya fro or the rhymes that you wrote?
I said this before and I'll say it one more time
These rhymes that I drop, they'll never define
Anything I am until the day that I die
And for all eternity my definition'll be Christ
And I won't ever lose sight and I won't ever walk blind
And I won't ever look behind, I'll stay focused on the light
I hope ya understand that I ain't tryin' to judge ya
I ain't tryin to diss ya just tell ya God loves ya
He wants to define ya and He wants to hide ya
From the world every time the devil wants to blind ya
He wants to save ya from satan's traps that try to bind ya
But ya push Him away and let the world define ya
Don't even start tellin me, "But you're such a dork,
I don't wanna be like you, you don't fit in and you're so short."
Like I said before I'm standin up for my Lord
And really if I wanna fit in that's what youth group's for
But since I know I got a way more important mission
I really couldn't care less whether or not I fit in
I'm gonna say this one last time now so listen
I don't care what you think cuz Christ's my defintion
[HOOK]
Give it up and make Christ your identity (9x)
(Is that your identity?)
So there it is, that's my definition
That's what my life's about, that's what I'm representin
That's my definition, that's what my life means
When people look at me, Christ is what they see
I don't care what you think cuz Christ's my defintion
It's probably my longest one, but it's my best one too. if you wanna hear it go to: My Soundclick and go to "Definition" (on the music page)
and about your song...It's awesome! Do you like write music to your songs too or just lyrics? I think it would sound really cool as like an upbeat/SK-sounding song. Actually, while I was reading it, I was just like singing it in my head and it ROCKS!
--- " YAY TREVOR. GO TREVOR. TREVOR ROCKS..TREVOR IS AWESOME..TREVOR..OWNS trevor umm..IS BEAUTIFUL.." --JesusRocksHard
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Re: New song...YAY
quote:
pindizzlegurl124 wrote:
How many y'all girls like MTV
And ya wish ya looked more like Angelina Jolie
And ya want Britney's hair but, oh wait, it's all gone
So now all of y'all think it's cool to be bald
Well I'm sick of all that so now I gotta take a stand
Even if most of the world don't know who I am
The entire human race is about as dumb as sheep
Cuz this generation's got way too much conformity
I mean come on why do all the girls like Tom Cruise
But reject a lovin God who really cares about you
God'll make ya happier than Brad Pitt can
So why don't you accept Him cuz He's reachin out His hand
Amen to that. That is a really good song..wow. Your a really good song writer, seriously!
As for your other one, its really good too!
I think it should be called "Breaking Free" or "Breakin' free"..whatever. And no, its not like the high school musical song lol, not even close. Actually, it would make a good rap and rock song. Like together like tfk does. Maybe the pre-chorus and chorus are singing and the other part rapping.
Good job!
You deserve a smiley face clap!-
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Re: calling all Song Writers
Heres another one...lol-
"Worthless Hearts"
My heart is consumed by darkness
How could You love a heart like this?
I ask, as I enter these obstacles ahead.
My heart is broken with sin.
So, Am I really that worthless?
(chorus)
And we are those worthless hearts
That ignore You, Help us 'cause we need You
And we are those worthless hearts that keep on
bleeding.
And You find a way to love us.
My heart itches to love You, but my mind blames You.
How could You die for me?
When all we do is wait for some miracle.
My heart is saved by the ever-so shining Light.
And it CANNOT be put out.
So am I worthless or not?
(chorus)
And..We are not worthless in Your eyes.
Yeah, Jesus you see me for who I am. And your neverending love is proof that I'm a lot more than worthless!
(chorus)
Okay Im done lol.
I know that some people may not agree with this song. But I wrote it to help me because so many times I have labeled myself worthless.
I wrote this song for anybody that thinks that Jesus doesn't care about them, and theres no place for them in this world.
I wrote this song for this guy named Steven, who sadly did commit suicide. Think about and pray for people who did (pray for there families) or will do that.
Also it doesn't have to be songs it could me poems, or stories about God.
--- "I LOVE TREVOR MCNEVAN! HE'S SO AWESOME! AND HE HAS THE AWESOMEST SOUL PATCH EVER! YAY TREVOR!"-MC
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cool...and kinda sad. but ummm...what's not like the HSM song? and i never really thought about doing a rapcore song for that one i wrote...thx, that could actually work . I guess I'll post another song...but oh, which one? i'll post my first one!
"Which Way?"
I heard em laugh and put the thorns on His head
They hung Him on a cross and now His body’s dead
I raised Him from the very day He was born
Now He’s hangin’ here, His body’s beaten and torn
I can hardly bear all the pain I feel inside
But I know He’s goin’ through it all just to bring me life
I saw the temple curtain as it ripped apart
The sky turned black at the last beat of His heart
He said “It is finished,” breathed His last and died
Then a soldier came and stuck a spear in His side
They put Him in a tomb and closed it with a stone
But Jesus came back and ascended to His throne
[HOOK]
Which way you gonna go? It’s a choice you gotta make
You can believe or be deceived, so which side you gonna take?
Will you take the straight and narrow or take the other road?
You gotta make a choice and decide which way you wanna go
You’re runnin’ outta time, you gotta make your choice today
Cuz right now you’re just standin’ still askin’ “Which way?”
[Repeat]
(Which way?)
After that, persecution began
The pagans started killin’ anyone who took a stand
They were tortured and burned and some were even crucified
But some weren’t strong enough and some of them denied
Some stood strong no matter what it cost
Knowin’ if they gave their lives they’d never be at loss
Cuz back then people valued freedom of religion
But today we take for granted everything we’re given
The persecuted Christians could deny God and live
Instead they chose to stand up and live or die for Him
It’s a choice all of us gotta make today
We can just live for satan or follow God’s way
[HOOK]
Why do people laugh and say it’s all a lie
That God sent His only Son to die and give us life?
Everyone just seems to think they got it all today
And the free gift of Christ just all fades away
All the selfish people who are caught up in themselves
Will probably reconsider it one day when they’re in hell
There’s so many people who just think that they can wait
They put it off everyday ‘til one day it’s too late
Then the others live their lives for Christ fervently
And they know that heaven’s where they’ll spend eternity
So listen up, and decide to live for Christ
Hear my advice and take death over deny
[HOOK]
so yeah, i just wrote that in like an hour or so. i had never written a song before . it's one of the ones KJ heard. i'll post some more later
--- " YAY TREVOR. GO TREVOR. TREVOR ROCKS..TREVOR IS AWESOME..TREVOR..OWNS trevor umm..IS BEAUTIFUL.." --JesusRocksHard
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Thats sweet. I'll post more later..
I mean the High schoool music by saying that you should call your song "Breakin' Free"
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Thanks..
Waldo, you dont have any? 
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Thats sweet. I'll post more later..
I mean the High schoool music by saying that you should call your song "Breakin' Free"
oh...i've never seen HSM, so i guess i would get it then ...well yeah i mean i get it now
ok here's another song:
"Crucified (feat. MC SE7EN)"
MC Pindar:
You heard the stories of a man 2000 years ago
The man who was put on earth to save every soul
The man who was beat and hung on a cross to die
The man who came back to life after He was crucified
The man named Jesus who lived a sinless life
God's only Son and our only perfect sacrifice
Some of y'all out there are willin' to believe
But others is just like "I don't do the Jesus thing"
Some of y'all got doubts goin' through ya mind
But some who say you don't believe know you do inside
You won't stand up even though you know it's right
You're scared of bein' crucified, you're too scared to fight
You want the world to love you no matter what it costs
You think you got it goin' on but you're really lost
You gotta pick up your cross and go out to the battlefield
Let them hear ya war cry scream His name loud and clear
Let them talk about you, let them crucify you
Cuz when no one else will God will stand by you
He gave His life for you don't throw His gift away
Once you let Him run your life you'll never be the same
Give it all up and just lay down ya pride
You gotta die to yourself and be crucified
HOOK:
I'm crucified with Christ and I no longer live
My life for myself I live it through Him
The life that I live I know it ain't mine
I'm livin' by faith cuz I been crucified
[REPEAT]
MC SE7EN:
I'm crucified with Christ, the sacrifice who paid the price
Who was hung up on a cross, nailed, stabbed in the side
And you the reason H e came, the reason He died
So you could be free from ya sin and live life
That's why I ain't afraid to bust a flow and keep it locked
I ain't afraid to get down and keep the show rocked
For the Shepherd who laid down His life for the flock
If you don't like what I'm spittin' then you can just walk
Away from me now and what I say
But I'm spittin' the truth and on Judgement Day
You gonna wish you'd dropped to ya knees to pray
Cuz the fact is that Jesus is the only way
And the truth is not gonna go away
That you gotta be crucified each and every day
So listen up quick to what we be spittin'
In Galatians 2:20, you know it's written
Paul crucified himself and his life
Hung himself on the cross up there next to Christ
Let Jesus have control of all that he had
And I think we should all be like that
To ignore what He did would just be wack
He gave His life for us so we oughta give 'em back
[HOOK]
There's one thing I wanna make clear right now
When you follow Christ you'll never be part of the crowd
When you're crucified you gotta lay it all down
Step out in faith and let Christ turn ya life around
The world won't mean much to ya anymore
When you open up and let Him come through the door
You gotta take a stand no matter what the world demands
Stay strong in Christ and follow His commands
When the world torments you cuz of His name
Shout it from the rooftops that you ain't ashamed
Even if you're not physically crucified
When you follow Christ that's what's goin' on inside
I'm dead to the world, I'm dead to myself
Cuz Christ stepped on the scene and delivered me from hell
The world can never take me cuz I belong to Christ
And I'll never turn back cuz I been crucified
I'm hangin' on a cross for everyone to see
But my Savior's right here and He's standin' next to me
He ain't hangin' on a cross, He came back to life
Now I'm gonna follow Him and be crucified
I'll never let anything on this earth define me
So I say to the world CRUCIFY ME!
[HOOK 2x]
Christ gave His life up just so I could live
So all of my life is the least I can give
Every word, every line, every beat, every rhyme
Every breath that I breathe, this is my sacrifice
39 lashes and a crown of thorns
He hung on a cross while His blood poured
[HOOK]
MC SEV is my bro in case y'all didn't know...he's the only person i've ever collabed w/  . he's gonna have i think 3 songs that i'm in on his cd he's working on and i'm gonna be in an interlude, but i think actually he's taking the interlude off. one is a song he did a long time ago called "Gethsemane" (the one that got me started rapping) and he decided to re-record it, and he said if i wanted to i could be in it when he re-did it so, then he had this other one that was an open collab for his cd, and i wanted to be in it so he said i could. he wasn't gonna have "Gethsemane" on his cd, he was gonna put it on his next one, but he completely changed the cd so they're both gonna be on there i think. and there's another one that almost wasn't on there that is gonna have like 5 people in it (it was gonna have 9 i think, but some of em got cut), so i think that one will be on there too. i can post some of his stuff on here once he gets it online somewhere
--- " YAY TREVOR. GO TREVOR. TREVOR ROCKS..TREVOR IS AWESOME..TREVOR..OWNS trevor umm..IS BEAUTIFUL.." --JesusRocksHard
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but probably if I ever do anything with it, there won't be any. So if anyone has any tips or anything to make this song better, PLEASE TELL ME!
