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Hopeless Romantic with doubts about success
Posted. I was in kind of a reflective mood when i wrote my post, tell me what you guys think. Also, What are the rules on this board about language and...stuff Like od garments on heads
<caughs Kevin>
<caughs panty hat>
Honestly when I thought about How I would react, this is what came to mind(and of course if Motoko had said something like"that was horrible" I'd have commited seppuku, so I posted the only reactiong that my character could deal with. While every one seems to be getting happy with results they worked long and hard for(the wooing of a certain Wiggan) I had to put a kind of bittersweetness to my 'success' some doubts and regrets at the way things were rushed.
Oh and by the by, Kevin exellent work on your story, entertaining and realistic at the same time.
<Lassos Spike's Legs>Amy GO get him!<points to Spike>
Scott, tastful and entertaining as always...earlier on the board you even managed to mention Belldandy and quicky in the same breath<grins as he watches Scott growing uncomfortable> I like the way you are unfolding the romance
Last edited by roblade, 4/23/2004, 4:09 am
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Gats: But I didn't bring a flame
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Squall Leonhart: "My dream wasn't nice, I dreamed I was a moron."
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4/22/2004, 11:56 pm
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Re: NEFF Discussion Board
One small change I would have you make:
from: Looking rather disheveled
to: looking slightly dazed and throughly disheveled.
I'm fairly certain Motoko giving it her all would just about kill a man.....but what a way to go...
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Gats: But I didn't bring a flame
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Squall Leonhart: "My dream wasn't nice, I dreamed I was a moron."
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4/23/2004, 11:20 am
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Re: NEFF Discussion Board
the last post on page 2.
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Well, while I mull on how to resolve the dilemma I have put Bell and Scott into, yes there will be a resolution as I didn't call it Prelude to a Kiss for nothing, this is just a quickie to give a little background info from the dark queens perspective.
the quickie you were refering to had nothing to do with sex, thats what made it funny.
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4/24/2004, 10:58 pm
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WOW!
I'm glad to see the forums getting back to the way they used to. I was afraid things wouldn't take off. Happy to be wrong on that one! Now if only we could get Urd and Chii back. I know Urd had a hotmail address and Chii had a Yahoo.jp address. There was one more but, unfortunately, I can't remember her username.
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4/25/2004, 8:24 am
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just us here
I think that anytime you gather the same people in a new place, with the same general ideas, aside from the growing and changing they have each done, you will get the same type of stuff theat they had fun doing last time.
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Gats: But I didn't bring a flame
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Squall Leonhart: "My dream wasn't nice, I dreamed I was a moron."
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4/25/2004, 12:28 pm
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I was thinking about adding some dark comic releif. more evil us'es.
Snott (scott)
Helldandy (belldandy)
Kelben (Kevin)
Army (amy)
Gory (me)
etc.
failed creations of the dark queen that escaped the experimental lab and are now realking havoc and trying to find and eleminat us.
what do you guys think?
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Gats: But I didn't bring a flame
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Squall Leonhart: "My dream wasn't nice, I dreamed I was a moron."
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4/29/2004, 9:33 pm
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Oh, what a tangled web we weave...
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5/2/2004, 2:54 pm
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OK thats fine, I didnt have any story worked up for it, it was just an idea.
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5/2/2004, 4:46 pm
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I planned to do more than that origionally but my creativity just went splat after i got that done. I will try to get the res of it fleshed out soon. or would you rather i delet it untill it can be posted in its entireity?
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5/3/2004, 12:08 am
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wonderful use of iambic pintameter in places, ending line rhymes, etc. very colorful and fresh. It was a nice change from the ordinary although it would get old very quickly if you do posts consecutively like that. It also fit perfictly with the subject matter you were relating to us. Bravo, Bravo, well done, Scotty
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